Statement about my work to do with peoples movements

As a follow up to the previous post, I have reworded my statement on my work to do with peoples movements:


I am interested in the power I have as an artist to control people and their movements. I use concrete as a medium for this because of its powerful, dominant, formidable qualities. I also feel that concrete directly and indirectly affects our movements and lifestyles subconsciously every day, regardless of what work I produce.